Hi Maddi your reading log looks great, you have put a lot of effort into setting out. I feel you have done well with making connections to the book and describing to two main characters of the book, but you need to edit your work more carefully before uploading. Next time you need to continue to develop how you make good connections to a text, by giving more detail and evidence from the book/s to justify your opinion.
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Hi Maddi your reading log looks great, you have put a lot of effort into setting out. I feel you have done well with making connections to the book and describing to two main characters of the book, but you need to edit your work more carefully before uploading. Next time you need to continue to develop how you make good connections to a text, by giving more detail and evidence from the book/s to justify your opinion.